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It's hard to be tough on the outside
When on the inside I’m falling apart
To relive the person I once was
Makes me feel like I’ve had a false start
My emotions are wild and I’ve hit a wall
The tension is building me thin
My hair has been cocked to a mannish disguise
To illustrate the dilemma I’m in.
The mirror refracts an impartial mire
That describes the person that’s me
To lean on the love that has tempered me
Takes away from my selfless physique.
© 2014 - 2024 unordinalwhimsey
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I would love to know more about the poetry. Seems somewhat interesting and moving, but yet mild-mannered and tempered, well the word's right in it. Specifically seems like morality mixed with selflessness ... (someone reliving their mortality on earth and reflecting on possible better outcomes for their righteous deeds). Hopefully a loving peaceful connection with an angel can help this person out. GOD BLESS YOU AND HAVE A GOOD EVENING DEAR FRIEND. I have missed you so. Keep your chin up and eyes brightly shining with blissful and witty abundances. Thanks for the share. xxx
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xxx I would love to know more about the poetry. Seems somewhat interesting and moving, but yet mild-mannered and tempered, well the word's right in it. Specifically seems like morality mixed with selflessness ... (someone reliving their mortality on earth and reflecting on possible better outcomes for their righteous deeds). Hopefully a loving peaceful connection with an angel can help this person out. GOD BLESS YOU AND HAVE A GOOD EVENING DEAR FRIEND. I have missed you so. Keep your chin up and eyes brightly shining with blissful and witty abundances. Thanks for the share. xxx
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