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I'm expressless in words, Your love never fails.
Whether it be the stars in the sky or the men you provide,
The sparkle hits my eyes and I'm happy as day.
Let not the truth be cumbersome in my mouth
Let not my worries find me out
Let not the devil prick in doubt
But give me keen eyes that mirror Your
Son, wisdom, and eternity.
Whether it be the stars in the sky or the men you provide,
The sparkle hits my eyes and I'm happy as day.
Let not the truth be cumbersome in my mouth
Let not my worries find me out
Let not the devil prick in doubt
But give me keen eyes that mirror Your
Son, wisdom, and eternity.
J
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I can't say I am FOR the opening or entire stanza, as it's very common imagery I see all the time, honestly; however, in the second stanza it's definately informative, and sends the viewer a message as to what you are trying to get across.
The two ending lines have a nice rhetorical innocent question to it.
It is really a bright piece, and I like it allot, despite my minute dislike of bright poetry.
The two ending lines have a nice rhetorical innocent question to it.
It is really a bright piece, and I like it allot, despite my minute dislike of bright poetry.