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Fickle love

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I've yet to sew your rhythm in a spoon
One day a needle's pierce will suit and swoon
But love's tangent an endless yearn
For man forgotten ne'r be earned.

A fickle fringe a laden keeps at bay
The comfort found in finding you astray
Freedom conquers slavery every time
Jarring on the borders of my line.
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PeacefulSoul's avatar
Why is it that I feel as though I have commented on this very poem?

Did you recently or at some time resubmit this or something? I don't know . . .

Nonetheless, I know I've read this before, and I am back to read it again, and I always liked what you did to it, just how it's rhymed overall and its alignment in the stanzas. I still enjoy this poem.